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Brevity may indeed be the soul of wit, but it won't get you into an Ivy League college.
That's the conclusion reached by Milo Beckman, a 14-year-old student at New York City's Stuyvesant High School. He says his independent research shows that students who write longer SAT essays consistently score higher than those who get to the point quickly.
"Good Morning America" reports that Beckman stumbled upon this secret to SAT success while taking the college entrance exam himself. He took the test twice, and the second time he improved his score. Most kids would be thrilled, but Beckman says he was, in fact, annoyed.
"I looked up one of the facts I had used in the essay which I wasn't completely sure of and it turns out I had basically blatantly lied in the essay," he tells "GMA."
However, this inferior essay had one thing going for it: It was long.
Beckman decided to test his theory, and asked his peers to count the lines in their essays and give him their scores. He collected 115 data samples and says longer essays almost always had a higher score. His research is in line with that of Les Perelman, the director of writing across curriculum at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology, who tells "GMA" he supports Beckman's theory.
"The more you write, the higher the score. The more words on the page, the higher the score," Perelman says.
His own research shows that he can predict the same results 90 percent of the time just by looking at the length of a student's essay.
"Milo's findings are exciting to me for the reason that any researcher is excited when somebody else takes their research and applies it in an innovative way and replicates it. Because it confirms my research," he tells "GMA."
Could it be that smarter kids just write longer essays? No, says Beckman. He compared the scores of kids who took the test twice, and every time they scored higher when they were more wordy.
"Every single one of them got a higher or equal score on their longer essay," he tells ABC. "Not a single one got a worse score on their longer essay."
The College Board, which administers the SAT, is less enamored of Beckman's research. In a statement to "GMA," it responds: "It's very common for longer writing samples to more effectively convey nuanced, persuasive arguments."
While the College Board may not agree, Beckman's findings have a fan in MIT's Perelman, who has been critical in the past of the SAT essay and how it is evaluated.
His take? Beckman's research gets a perfect score.
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11-09-2010 @ 1:05PM
Alicia said...No, College Board is lazy and counts lines instead of reading content. No one should score higher on fluff and filler and false information pulled out their @$$ than on a short, well-written essay. I'm a junior writing major and my professors always tell us to take what we've written, cut out the filler and repetition and then we'll have a well-written piece.I remember writing my SAT essay and completely BSing it. I scored among the highest of my friends because it was almost four pages long.
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11-09-2010 @ 4:07PM
dmr said...SAT essays only have two pages, therefore you are lying.
11-09-2010 @ 5:55PM
irene said...maybe she meant 4 pages as in 2 full pages front to back
11-09-2010 @ 5:41PM
Jen said...I just took the SATS. There are two pages...double sided. Thus four pages. Stop jumping on people.
11-09-2010 @ 7:11PM
Alicia said...Thank you, Irene and Jen. Apparently people have forgotten that each side of a piece of paper is counted as a page.
11-09-2010 @ 8:04PM
George Gibson said...Having been in the test prep business for over 28 years, I can assure you the space allowed on for the Written Essay on the SAT is two lined pages. The ACT has four lined pages.
Also, the "secret" discovered by the student in New York is something that has been taught in our SAT and ACT prep courses since the addition of the Written Essay to the SAT several years ago.
Finally, the College Board trains the essay graders to use a specific rubric to score each essay. Among the most important aspects of a student's essay is specifically addressing the essay prompt, inclusion of supportive details in a well-organized manner, and concluding the essay with a summary.
This national attention on longer SAT essays is something we've known about in Texas for the last several years.
11-10-2010 @ 9:06AM
Maria said...Actually, I have proctored many SAT administrations. It is not four sides of a paper either. These are not double-sided pieces of paper. It is two "sides" of a paper, if you will, though that's not really how it looks. You open the answer booklet, and there is a page on the left and a page on the right, and those are the only places you are allowed to write. What SATs are you all taking?
11-09-2010 @ 2:53PM
Bresy said...College Board says one thing and does another, if you ask me I have come across more students who have nothing but issues with this company, us included. One supervisor says one thing the other the next, to keep record you need the name and a number to verify what one said compared to the other. So how can College Board actually know what they are saying when they do not teach their own employees the "rules". This finding does not surprise me at all! Poorly run company by a former politician ~ what more can I say!
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11-09-2010 @ 10:46PM
Liara said...Son of a bitch. You mean I could have gotten an even higher score back when I took the SAT (and they were just starting to including the writing test), if I'd have rambled on for another half page or so and filled up the rest of the space? Why would they include a writing test, if all they care about is how many words (or rather, lines) you spew onto the page? Also: what about if you write small... will you get a higher score for an identical essay if you use giant elementary school student handwriting for it rather than small printing? Such a crock... Now maybe they'll actually have to grade the things if they don't already, so the evidence doesn't continue to mount against them.
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11-09-2010 @ 3:24PM
DAVID said...This article is no surprise. Longer essays tend to be more fully developed, have more complex discussion and reasoning and include more relevant examples and evidence. I teach college entrance test prep classes and have been an SAT essay reader for the College Board. The key to higher SAT and ACT scores is to learn the test taking strategies, read magazines and books that are high level (Atlantic, New Yorker, Us News & World Report), develop your vocabulary, and take high level (AP) classes in tested subjects. It is very helpful to take a college entrance test prep class and it is essential to get practice books and religously take exam after exam - always reading the REASONS for wrong answers, so you don't make the same errors again. As with all challenges in life, there is no "magic bullet" for getting high scores...just hard work.
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11-09-2010 @ 5:28PM
Coop said...A well-developed vocabularly enables a writer to express cogent thoughts clearly using fewer words, not more. But, on the SAT, you score higher based on wordiness with no regard for quality of the content.
If you've learned what you're supposed to learn in high school, you only need to take the SAT ONCE to do well. All the hard work should be done in school, not in test prep courses.
11-09-2010 @ 6:43PM
Amandaline said...More words does not alway mean a better essay. Sometimes it may and sometimes it may not and the only way to know that is to sit down and read the content, which apparently they do not do, according to the young man's research (albeit limited). I can tell you the exam does not take int to account visual disorders in which scanned answer sheets can become misalligned, not does it facture in for persons with mobility issues which may not be able to fill in a circle without causing extrenious marks, which alter the score and therefore often are only measure how well the test taker can fill in a circle and line it up in the correct order. I can also tell you they must be interested in measure wealth, if taking special classes and buy special materials elevates most scores, as opposed to taking the test without those expensive items.
When I was studing Elementary Education in the mid 1990's Colleges and Universities, as well as public and private schools were working toward getting away from standardized testing, in favor of individual portfolio for applicants and students. Portfolios give an accurate individual measurement of student's work, as opposed to luck and privaledge, in taking a standardized test, for which students can pay money to prepare for a higher score and often result in inaccurate results. Then in 2000 the nation was forced into increase standardized testing to meet the requirment s of No Child Left Behind. The program sound like it is there for the underprivaledged, but instead it ensures that the underprivaledge cannot compete with that who can afford to pay for special private classes and special test preperation materials. So the push for individual excellence by both higher and lower educations, in both the private and public sectors, faded, as teachers had to once again start teaching for the increased load of standardized test, rather than teaching with the intention of the students actually learning the curriculum so they can independently present themselves and still seem knowledgable.
11-11-2010 @ 2:03PM
Katie said...I don't know about that. I'm an IB student who has been trained to operate within word limits. My first essay was rather simplistic and I wasn't really happy with it, but I scored very well. My second one, however, was shorter, but had good analysis, reasoned arguments, back up, and was written in a style that gets me A's in my Theory of Knowledge and English classes. That one received a score that was lower by almost 60 points, despite being a stronger paper.
11-09-2010 @ 4:06PM
Charles said...SAT-Sounds About Truthful.
Another indication of how our Ed. System fails each and every year.
Another test that some take well and some don't. Proves little in fact about how a student may or may not perform in college.
I'm sure we'll keep paying for it and they'll keep giving it.
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11-09-2010 @ 3:57PM
eric said...One of my college professors told us thats all she did was looked at how long the paper was and just gave a score based on the length and she reads for the ACT, look its not that big of a deal anyways, its just another scam that these testing places make sound like a big deal...its all about the money
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11-09-2010 @ 4:07PM
dmr said...If you professor said that, she should be fired as she is totally unprofessional.
11-09-2010 @ 4:10PM
musicdrummer01 said...I could have told you that. College Board also gives the AP Tests. For
each sample essay I've looked at, the longer ones were given a score
of 8 or 9, (with grade scale of 0 to 9).
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11-09-2010 @ 4:27PM
Ted said...Of course, studying diligently and getting plenty of rest before the test might also help with scoring. But then, hey -- why not find a way to beat the system, right?
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11-09-2010 @ 4:31PM
GB said...This is old news, and was covered weeks ago on TV.
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11-09-2010 @ 4:45PM
amlegends said...This is where SCAM USA goes big league, then comes
the job market, the stock market, and all the other markets
which, whatever they are, are not free.
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